Weight looks good around 0.6-0.8, perfect value i find for myself is 0.7, try starting from here. ADetailer strongly recommended.
You might want(not necessary) to use flat 2d models such as Sudachi or use suitable tokens, since i think it more fitting for this style.
If you like the style please support original artist and if you like this lycoris leave a review.
Taken request from Civitai discord server.
Have a great day. <3